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5 Ways To Make Your Website Easier To Read

Monday, January 26th, 2009
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Is your website readable?  Think: Do your customers want to use it to find information?  The answer is important.  Because, most often, people are going to your site for two reasons:  (1) to find information and (2) to perform tasks.

A lot of our customers are making a transition from shouting to content marketing (we’re proud of you!)  Content marketing places a premium on good info, whether you’re telling a story or explaining your prices.

One compliments the other, and vice-versa.  Good content is informative.  And information is good content.  Like cereal and milk.  Like nooks and crannies.  Like George and Weezy.  They go together.

Good info- it’s clear.  Concise.  Crisp.  Just the facts.  Don’t bury it in long paragraphs.  Don’t hype it up.

Recognize that a lot of your customers are just looking for information.  Here are some good ways you can let them do just that on your website-

•    Use Active Space (the blank areas between the text).  Passive space rests in the margins, allowing readers to focus on the page.  But active space is found inside the main content area.  Your active space helps readers group and separate information.

•    Less Is More Better.  Be able to separate content that’s important to you from the content readers can use.  Before you write, go back to the reasons your customers come to your site, and ask:  Is this informative?  Will this help them perform a task?

•    Cut.  Cut Again.  Then Cut Some More.  Most web users don’t want to read- they just want information.  Focus on the facts, and cut the fat.

•    Make Your Point At The Beginning.  Traditional writing makes its point at the conclusion.  On the web, most readers won’t get to the end.  Put your conclusion first.

•    Use Bullets.  They’re nice.  They’re easy to read.  People like them.  Bullet it up.

So, can you censor yourself?  It’s the hardest thing about writing.  But I think your customers will thank you.

2 Writing Tips: Principle And Process

Thursday, January 22nd, 2009
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The (Same) Scenario

You’re sitting in front of your computer, staring at a blank screen.  You know you need to write.  An email blast, a newsletter, a blog.  New content.  But you are not writing.  Not a word.

You bury your head in your hands- it’s hopeless.  You decide to call your insurance agent to shoot the breeze about coverage plans.  You start browsing QVC

Chin Up, Lil’ Buckaroo

Take heart.  Writing takes effort.   Just because you’re not flying through pages doesn’t mean you can’t write.  In fact, it’s probably a good thing- if you’re churning out content, it’s going to read like spam.  Think about this:  would you want to read what you’ve just written?

So make your work count.  After all (and here’s the big upside), content marketing is writing about your favorite subject:  you.

Write about what you like, what you don’t like, cool things that you’ve come across, a great idea that you’ve got.  Especially write about people that you love (read: your customers).  What made you get into the business in the first place?  Write about that.

Planning:  The Principle

Two things to think about before you start writing something:  Principle and Process.  Write them down, before you start, every time.  I guarantee you, it will make writing much, much easier to do.  And when it’s easier, it’s better.

The Principle is whatever idea you want to get across.  Want people to see the new cabins?  Fine.  Principle:  You sleep-tested the new cabins and here are your findings.  Getting a bunch of new logo items in the store?  Principle: Your favorite T-shirts and why.

The Principle is a guide.  It’s the point. You’re the point.  Whenever you’re stuck, go back to the Principle.   It’s the reason you’re writing what you’re writing.

Doing:  The Process

So, you’ve defined your Principle.  Now it’s time to think about the Process.  The Process is all the different ways you can explain the Principle.  The Process can be limitless, as long as it points to the Principle.

Let me explain:  Process can be an account about what you did yesterday.  Process can be a list of cool things about your customers.  Process can be an letter to a river, or a mountain.  Process can be your favorite customer story from ten years ago.

The Process is the fun part.  Tell your story.  Teach someone something.  Be not boring.  Even if what you’re writing is unfamiliar, it’s okay.  Acknowledge that; there’s really no way to hide it, anyway.  Does your style (Process) fit your goal (Principle)?  It should.

Practice

Here’s something cool:  Principle and Process work for everything, not just writing.  Teaching someone to ski, raking leaves, splitting atoms.  It can all be broken down into those two things.

The next time you come across something that you need to write about- an event, or a new facility, or product-  think about it in those terms.  Break it down. When you sit down to write about it, map it out first.

You’ll be surprised.  It’s a clear way to point yourself in the right direction, to create a base to work from, instead of just staring at the screen.  After all, that page isn’t going to write itself.

About Partnership

Tuesday, January 20th, 2009
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A Bit Of News
Here’s something exciting:  Matterhorn Marketing is getting a partner.

It’s been a sole proprietorship, started (from -really- nothing) by Pat Strader 12 years ago.  Remember what the internet was like 12 years ago?

Pat and I started talking about joining up a couple of months back.  We’ve been working well together since my company, Pencilbox, got on it’s feet.  And we really do work well together.  We’re like climbing partners, but with marketing.

So, we’re excited about what’s coming up for us, and for our clients. This is partnership as an idea, as a concept, that we’re putting into practice.

This is about possibilities.

On The River
One of the great things about running whitewater rivers is that you very rarely go it alone.  There’s a relationship that develops between people that float together (or ski together, or play Dungeons And Dragons together- you get the idea).  At its best, it’s some combination of leadership, responsibility, hard work, and fun.

Those four qualities are shared among everyone involved.  If one person takes the lead on the water, another might step it up around camp.  The journey is everyone’s responsibility.  One thing is always true: it takes partnership to make it successful.

And that type of success just can’t be achieved on your own.  The process of partnership, working together, makes those results more than just the sum of their parts.  The end product can’t be the same if it’s done alone.

My greatest days on the river have been shared, and if they weren’t, they couldn’t have been my greatest days.  That’s what I mean by partnership.

Dreaming In Words
I have always been a very language-oriented person.  I’m a voracious reader and blog surfer, and I can savor a well placed turn-of-the-phrase like other people remember baseball games or Grateful Dead concerts.

Deciding to turn myself over to words- writing for a living- has been one of the best decisions of my life.  I don’t want to be Faulkner or Hemingway (though I’ve thought Faulkner would be a great blogger, and Hemingway would write the world’s most compelling web copy).

I just want to write.  And talk.  I love to talk about stuff.  It’s one of the reasons I’m so happy doing what I’m doing.  Starting a commercial writing company just felt natural.

But the chance for partnership, the chance to build something… more… was missing.  I knew I was missing the technical experience, the marketing miles, that would really put my writing to best use.

And I knew that a lot of people were missing an opportunity to say smart, engaging things about who they were.  There was a gap.  They needed what I love to do.

Where This Is Going
When Pat and I talked about forming a partnership, it made great sense to us.  Pat’s preached about creating quality content since Matterhorn’s beginnings.

And I’m a big believer in functionality.  It’s important, now more than ever, for marketing to work across a broad digital spectrum.  It needs to be understood and paid attention.  That’s what Pat does.

Both of us like how design helps content say more and functionality do more.  Design enables us to do what we do (and if any designers out there feel the same way, get in touch anytime.)

Partnership strengthens all of us in what we do.  I’m a better writer because of what Pat does, and he’s a better developer because of what I do.  Cool to think:  what does that do for our clients?

With all that in mind, the goal is to move marketing toward leadership.  Don’t “manage” marketing- lead it toward customers.  Make them (businesses, customers, the world) a part of it.

It’s something no one can really do by themselves.  We need partners.

Have Traffic? Now What?

Saturday, December 15th, 2007
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Like an old basketball coach would say….”Follow-Through!”.

You spend time and money to drive traffic to your website. Many of us in the travel and tourism industry rely on visitors to submit forms, requesting additional information or to check availability. Sadly, the follow-up on these requests is often lacking attention which can and does cost businesses in the end.

Here are some simple rules to follow to help convert more of those that contact you via email.

To begin with, respond in a timely manner. The Internet makes information available on-demand. Right or wrong, your visitors are not only wanting, but expecting a timely reply to their emails. If you are only checking and responding to email “every so often”, you aren’t serious about leveraging the Internet to help your business.

Check email often and respond in a timely manner. The caveat with timely response is that a high-quality, yet slightly slower response, is more valuable than a “quick and dirty” response. Auto-responders should be used with great care and you should not pat yourself on the back if you consider your auto-responder as a timely response.

Keep the subject line in-tact from the initial message. This will help “remind” the visitor’s that your email is relevant and not spam. Also keep the message thread in tact so both you and visitor can track the ‘conversation’.

This may sound like a given, but personalize the response! Use their name in the salutation and use your own name in the closing. Nothing can come across as more impersonal than an email signed, “Customer Service Rep 22341″.

If you want people to buy from you, you must establish trust, and forging a relationship is the fastest way to make that happen. Something as simple as personalizing an email can help.

Answer their questions. If they ask for specific information or have specific needs, address them! When you personalize a response and address their specific questions it proves that a real, live human being is responding to them.

DO NOT direct them to visit your website for more information! The majority of them will have just come from there and could not find the information they needed.

Be polite and positive. Another, “no kiddin’” tip, but it is surprising how few companies I see doing this well. Which do you think would be more warmly received

“To make a reservation please call 111-111-111-1111 between 8 and 6.”

OR

“To make a reservation please call us at your earliest convenience. We look forward to speaking with you and will be happy to help you reserve your trip.”

Don’t go overboard with the flowery prose and blatant ass-kissing, however, be genuine and let people know you appreciate them and want to offer them the best possible service.

Be clear and simple with your writing. Sadly, the average American reads at the 7th/8th grade level. Skip the big words and keep the sentences and paragraphs short.

Also be sure to proofread for common mistakes and misspellings. Have a list of words you have trouble spelling? Most of us non-Mensa types do. Keep the list handy.

Lastly, make it easy for people to contact you. Create a simple “signature” in your email client that includes the contact information most important to your visitors.

Create Compelling, Engaging Content for Your Website

Tuesday, December 12th, 2006
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One of the most important, yet most overlooked, component of your website is your content…more specifically your copywriting.

In almost all of my projects it seems that copywriting is an afterthought, just the icing on the cake so to speak. Quality copywriting can make even a bad design effective, and poor copywriting can make a great design bomb.

Can the topic of creating quality content be covered in a single blog post…absolutely not. I have been working hard of late to gain more knowledge of this all important topic.

Some outstanding books include Waiting for Your Cat to Bark and Call to Action, both by Jefferey and Bryan Eisenberg. The core of these books is creating compelling content, relevant to the visitors persona using a technique which they call ‘Persuasion Architecture’. Highly recommended.

Some themes and important concepts to keep in mind when creating your website content.

  • Write with terms that your visitors use in describing your product of service
  • Ditch the jargon, acronyms and keep it simple and to the point
  • Chunk up your copy allowing for easy scanning…use quality, descriptive subheaders
  • Use hyperlinks effectively…moving visitors down the conversion pipeline
  • Empathize with your visitor, put yourself in their shoes in viewing your product or service
  • Go easy on superlatives
  • Create an emotional tie with the visitor, make them envision themselves using your product or service
  • Write in active voice as much as possible
  • Accentuate the benefits that will come from your service….not the features
  • Be concise
  • Understand the buying cycle and trigger words associated with each phase (See Call to Action)

This is just a short list of things which can make an immediate impact on the success of your website. Read a book, take a class and learn more about how you can create quality, relevant and highly effective copy for your webpages.

What are your thoughts on creating quality content and copywriting?